Kitsuki Yasuko
Genbu Company of the North
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« Reply #180 on: October 01, 2011, 01:31:17 PM » |
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Ok, I wrote down my lengthy fiction. It did not fit into one post, so I posted it in parts. Hope you guys like it.
Wasn't there a 1000 words limit? XD |
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Dragon Clan • Courtier • Advisor to Seppun Shin • Imperial • Justicar-wannabe • Knows things you don't • Smells of apricot
Status: 1.5 • Glory: 2.0 • Honor: What is expected
Carries: Wakizashi, knife, calligraphy set, gloves
"I see nothing more than you do. You look the wrong way."
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Evil Bob
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« Reply #181 on: October 01, 2011, 01:40:51 PM » |
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To enter do the following:
- Make a thread in this forum.
- Fill it with a short story about 1,000 words (I won't be counting so you can fudge, but abuse will be disqualified)
- Make sure your character is the central figure of the story and happens before the game starts
~,1000 words. It's not a limit, but yeah... |
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Soshi Karoshi
Genbu Company of the North
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« Reply #182 on: October 01, 2011, 01:52:44 PM » |
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A part of it may be treated as my submission, the rest is for your enjoyment.
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Soshi Karoshi
Genbu Company of the North
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« Reply #183 on: October 01, 2011, 02:15:04 PM » |
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I'd be very grateful for your comments.
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Akodo Heisuke
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« Reply #184 on: October 01, 2011, 02:17:46 PM » |
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I'd be very grateful for your comments.
I will get into it, knowing the 'pain' of having few feedback, I shall strive my best to provide the best I can. |
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Lion Clan • South Company • Gunso • Resolved • Tactician • Siege
Honor: What is Expected | Status: 3.0 | Glory: 2.5
God has given to man no sharper spur to victory than contempt of death.
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Soshi Karoshi
Genbu Company of the North
Posts: 153
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« Reply #185 on: October 01, 2011, 02:18:28 PM » |
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Thanks!  |
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Akodo Inuichi
Byakko Company of the West
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« Reply #186 on: October 01, 2011, 02:46:36 PM » |
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and yet my fiction has only had 1 actual comment. Why cousin, why do you forsake your akodo brethren.  |
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Lion Clan*Samurai*Scout*Virtuous*West Company Gunso
Honor: 7.5
Glory: 2
Status: 3
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Akodo Heisuke
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« Reply #187 on: October 01, 2011, 02:50:17 PM » |
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and yet my fiction has only had 1 actual comment. Why cousin, why do you forsake your akodo brethren. Because I've been working most of the week and have only now got time to read trough everything. Fear not cousin! Heisuke leaves no man behind. |
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Lion Clan • South Company • Gunso • Resolved • Tactician • Siege
Honor: What is Expected | Status: 3.0 | Glory: 2.5
God has given to man no sharper spur to victory than contempt of death.
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Akodo Inuichi
Byakko Company of the West
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« Reply #188 on: October 01, 2011, 02:51:47 PM » |
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you are a good man
*anime shoulder grasp w/ extended arm*
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Lion Clan*Samurai*Scout*Virtuous*West Company Gunso
Honor: 7.5
Glory: 2
Status: 3
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Akodo Heisuke
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« Reply #189 on: October 01, 2011, 02:55:17 PM » |
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Inuichi - eyes shine, birds sing- I have done it. As I have with Karoshi. Now return the favor  |
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Lion Clan • South Company • Gunso • Resolved • Tactician • Siege
Honor: What is Expected | Status: 3.0 | Glory: 2.5
God has given to man no sharper spur to victory than contempt of death.
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Soshi Karoshi
Genbu Company of the North
Posts: 153
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« Reply #190 on: October 01, 2011, 03:19:49 PM » |
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Moshi Shuichi
Suzaku Company of the South
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Squad One's Nikutai
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« Reply #191 on: October 01, 2011, 06:46:01 PM » |
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There there Shuichi!
Thanks Kitsuki-san, I only nearly murdered my computer once or twice.... Not that that is done though I can look into writing up my fiction in the next day or two. |
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Seppun Shin
Byakko Company of the West
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« Reply #192 on: October 01, 2011, 07:43:12 PM » |
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I'll get to reading the rest of you guys whenever I get my own done, I promise. I still haven't got past a small flow chart though >_>
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Imperial • Samurai • Scout • Commander • Experienced • Chui (vote for Shin 2011!?)
Honor: Exceptional
Status: 3.0 (Pending possible Chui-hood)
Glory: 2.0
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Shosuro Zhelazo
Genbu Company of the North
Posts: 120
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« Reply #193 on: October 01, 2011, 08:19:56 PM » |
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Mine is done. i like it, though I am against some tough competition. once I have edited it, I shall post it.
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Scorpion Clan Instigator * Courtier * Unique * South Company
Dangerous Beauty * Benten's Blessing
Honor: Untrustworthy Glory: 2 Status: 1
Carries: Wakizashi, Robes, Straw Cloak, Personality
"Do not threaten me. There are fates worse than death, and I can do all of them."
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Soshi Karoshi
Genbu Company of the North
Posts: 153
Void is a liquid
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« Reply #194 on: October 02, 2011, 05:53:32 AM » |
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